Hello fellow wizards and pirates!
So more than a year ago I made a small (well not really small… it was
rather long actually) post that contained a new story I was writing. I never
posted more of the story afterwards because of timing issues and I never got
around to it. I have a relatively light homework load this weekend and I was
able to revise the next few chapters that I wrote in the story. Over the next
few days I’ll slowly be posting the chapters in parts. So if you get bored
often and like to read stories for fun (or just like to read stories for fun)
then you have come to the right place! I’m just calling it Wizard101 Story
right now for lack of a better title.
Leave a comment if you like the story or
if you have some constructive criticism for me. It would be greatly appreciated.
:)
Happy holidays and enjoy!
Chapter 1 (part one) - Sophia
I looked around the attic nervously. “Maria, are you sure?” I said, I
noticed my voice was shaky and I tried to sound braver, “W-we shouldn’t b-be up
here.” so much for sounding brave.
I was talking to my twin sister, Maria, she looked the same as me except
for our hair, and hers was black while mine was blond, but other than that we
looked the same. Our personalities were a whole different story. Maria was bold
and brave, she didn’t care what other people thought and she always did stuff
she wasn’t supposed to do… and she never got caught. I was not like my sister,
the opposite really, I was shy and I was always wondering what people thought,
and I never did anything I wasn’t supposed to do.
Maria rolled her eyes, “I’m sure Aunt Vanessa doesn’t mind, she said we
could look around a little.”
“Yeah, but I just think she meant the bedrooms we’re going to be staying
in.”
Our parents were going on a vacation for the month and they left us with
our loving aunt. Aunt Vanessa was cool, seriously cool. She let us stay up
late, let us eat almost whatever we wanted and she always told us some made up
stories about a magical place called The Spiral where talking dogs,
salamanders, cows, bears, and many more creatures lived. There were also
wizards, aunt Vanessa claimed that she once was a wizard but we all knew she
was just kidding around. She talked about going around the spiral with all her
friends working together to defeat the most evil person of all, Malistaire.
When she had finally told us she and her friends had defeated him we had jumped
up for joy and started running around screaming in excitement, Aunt Vanessa had
gotten a kick out of that one.
But that had been years ago when we had been about six or seven years
old, now we were 13 and we still liked staying up late listening to her stories
but we stayed just a bit calmer whenever something exciting happened.
But either way, I thought it was just a little rude to be snooping around
in Aunt Vanessa’s attic without her knowing.
“We w-won’t touch anything t-though, right?” I asked nervously.
Maria rolled her eyes again and sighed, “No miss perfect! I will not
touch any of this really dusty junk.” Maria was using her high pitched little
girl voice which basically meant she was going to do whatever she wanted, which
is what she did already so it didn’t really make a difference. I sighed in
defeat. Maria was dead on about the attic being dusty though. I knew Aunt
Vanessa hadn’t lived in this house long but judging by the amount of dust I
could tell she didn’t come up to her atic very often.
There was mostly moving boxes and that was about it. The only light we
had though was coming from the door that was in the floor of the attic where
there had been a ladder that had unfolded and we climbed up from the hallway.
“Hey, I found something,” Maria said and I rushed over to my sister but then she made a noise. “Ugh, it’s just a flashlight, well, at least we can see now.” My sister turned the flashlight on… and it shined right in my eyes.
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